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tonight
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tonight, i am not able
to greet the stars with
my fingertips
tonight, i am not able
to sleep with silence
in an empty bed
tonight, the walls seem
closer and oxygen becomes
a bittersweet memory of feeling
tonight, i'm coloring the walls
black and hanging curtains
to conceal myself from the
moon, to isolate our
beautiful memories.
to greet the stars with
my fingertips
tonight, i am not able
to sleep with silence
in an empty bed
tonight, the walls seem
closer and oxygen becomes
a bittersweet memory of feeling
tonight, i'm coloring the walls
black and hanging curtains
to conceal myself from the
moon, to isolate our
beautiful memories.
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tragic, i must say.
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I really like this poem. I think, unlike the others I have read, this is a deep poem, I think the length might have something to do with that. Could also be that I especially connect with the second stanza right now.
I don't like the last stanza as much, because some of it seems mystified, but, I do really like the last line.
You seem to have a fascination with stars eh? It seems to be a recurring theme in your poetry. Most interesting.
Very familiar feeling here. I really like this
I don't like the last stanza as much, because some of it seems mystified, but, I do really like the last line.
You seem to have a fascination with stars eh? It seems to be a recurring theme in your poetry. Most interesting.
Very familiar feeling here. I really like this