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these thin painted
walls seperate us
and i trace the audible sounds
with my ear against the rough
colored obstruction
filtering the
space i require
accessible
but you
moan
and the
rumbling
of the
bed
resonates
permeates
penetrates
the silence
seperating
us
but
by then the
condensation
is wiped clean
and the wall
seems like
thin glass
she is no longer
your lover
walls seperate us
and i trace the audible sounds
with my ear against the rough
colored obstruction
filtering the
space i require
accessible
but you
moan
and the
rumbling
of the
bed
resonates
permeates
penetrates
the silence
seperating
us
but
by then the
condensation
is wiped clean
and the wall
seems like
thin glass
she is no longer
your lover
Literature
give me something poetic.
like the way the grass
sparkles
at dawn. scratch that,
too cliche. say,
shush, close your eyes
see the dawn
then forget. forget
because forgetting
is poetic. remember
your grandmother, sick
in the hospital, saying
the old should be beautiful.
this deserves
remembering.
Literature
looking back
like reading a book backward, i read you. tears crawled up your cheek and hid themselves in your eyes. i backed forward, pulled my lips against yours, pressed them away, and leaned back. my hand fell up to your face, traced your cheekbone, raised back down to my side.
you feel like glass against my skin
cold and distant, beautiful, let me in
like a poem bottom to top, i felt you near and against me. your arms wrapped around where i wasn't a few minutes later and where i won't be a moment ago. your eyes spelled out words right to left, .oot ,uoy evol i dna og ot evah uoy das m'i and i love you.
too, you love i and you love i. and backwards
Literature
the one who never fell for him
dear love,
your laugh tastes like strawberries on a winter night;
your breath feels like [insert fruit] on a ldfjasal;askdfjsa,
and the colour of your voice matches my broken heart.
Holy shit, you're cliché!
I've heard better pickup lines from my grandma's sister's cousin's potato farmer, Henry, who probably has a better chance in my pants than you and your reherased verses. Oh, and excuse my rhyming. I hate sounding pretentious/poetic.
PS You're from Idaho, so stop adding a "U" in color as if it's an airplane.
my pickup lines are sincere, so maybe you should pick up phonelines because
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i love the set up, and it was very compelling. (: